Dominant Edward written by: Twilightfans
Summary: Bella's family have been Edward's family's slaves for years and Edward claims Bella as his own. r&r please M for language and lemons. NEW VERSION.
Ramble: I really wish this story is a little longer. This story line has a lot of potential, but at the same time, I guess I can see why the author stopped at this point. Expanding the story out would be really interesting, but there is not a lot of other things that can be added to the story without forcing it. Other than that, I really like this story.
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