Monday, September 6, 2010

Classroom Secrets OneShot

Classroom Secrets OneShot written by: Little Ms. C

Summary: Bella has wanted her teacher Mr Cullen since she was 16,now 8 years later she's fresh out of college and looking for a job- turns out she's taking over from her favorite history teacher. Sparks will fly but the diff now is they can create fire works!

Ramble: At first, I thought there would be a little more to the story, like expanded beyond the first chapter. This is a pretty good story line, but it felt like a snip of a whole story. I can see how the author can expand the whole story if they wish to, but it is alright the way it is now. This way, readers will have to imagine how the story will end in the long run.

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