Six Weeks written by: The LUSTorium
Summary: Edward has been avoiding sexual contact with his wife for six weeks. What happens when she lays it all on the line?
Ramble: Wow, this story has an interesting sub plot. I mean, as a one-shot, readers do not really get a chance to get to know the characters. This is a pretty good story, but I would love to see it all stretched out into a multiple chapter story. It makes a very good prequel for that kind of story, so there. To the author, just think about it, and depending on how comfortable you are with expanding of course.
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