Monday, August 16, 2010

Swimming With Swan

Swimming With Swan written by: FL95

Summary: 2nd Place Judges Choice winner for MEN @ WORK o/s contest-Edward gives swim lessons. Bella is afraid of the water. She wants to learn. Can this highly talented, too good looking for his own good swim instructor teach her more than she bargains for? BxE AH

Ramble: At first, I wondered how such a simple summary can lead to a multiple chapter story. Once I read it, I saw how the author was able to keep expanding. There is a part of me that actually wanted it to be longer after reading the last chapter. It seems as if the summary and how it is written, that it will be possible for the author to expand on it even more if they choose to do so.

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