Brown Eyed Girl and Green Eyed Boy written by: Erika-Whitlock
Summary: Bella and Emmett own a bar in New York where Bella is about to meet Emmetts girlfriend, her brother and his girlfriend and his girlfriends brother. Little does she know is that she already know some of them. M for safety.
Ramble: I would like this story more if, there was more to it. While reading it, I really liked what the author put up, but the plot could be developed more, and into a chapter story. There is something about the ending that doesn't really give the conclusion feeling oneshots should end with. It would be really cool if this story is developed more. The resulting story would be really cool, especially if continuing with the plot that has been revealed so far.
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